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Author   Topic : "first post in a long time -- digital painting"
megazoid
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
Always inspired by the work here, so I decided to contribute. Comments/suggestions/criticisms welcome.


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the_monkey
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:49 pm     Reply with quote
great concept.

needs straight lines and defintion on that building.
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aquamire
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 10:11 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice and atmospheric! However, when I first looked at it, my eyes went directly to the water because it's the most detailed portion of the picture. Keep that in mind for future drawings.. detail can help lead the eye around an illustration and give a story. Use the most detailed areas of the picture to bring focus to whats happening. I think you need to sharpen up and give the most detail to the structure in the distance, as well as the spaceship.

Great pic though, hope you post more!
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