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Topic : "Bad Aim (aka Bad Title)" |
-Gux- member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2001 Posts: 170 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 12:12 pm |
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After watching the max payne trailer (over and over again) your imagination kind of gets stuck in action mode. The result:
The fact that I successfully rendered a location I had in mind is a bit of a milestone for me . Although I don't really know where it is supposed to be, besides some kind of warehouse with, hmm, concrete pillars.
Constructive criticism, paintovers, etc. are extremely welcomed. |
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Ax0 member
Member # Joined: 21 Feb 2001 Posts: 167 Location: Finland
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 10:46 pm |
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Max "pain" Payne, yeah. Real cool demo.
Maybe it's a warehouse for the artmuseum?
Cool pic though. That bullet hitting on
concrete/marmor is really realistic. Add more
of them to get it more action.
Critique: The shoes do look a little bit
odd, too short maybe. |
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-Gux- member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2001 Posts: 170 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2001 8:32 am |
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Thanks for the reply Ax0. Aha, of course it's a art museum warehouse
The shoes do look a little odd, but with bigger feet he might get a little clowny.
One thing I noticed about the image now after not seeing it for a few days, was that my shapes is a bit blurry and the values are in a pretty high key. I should have concentrated more on getting clean shapes and used more colour. Pretty good self crit, right?  |
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oscar member
Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2001 Posts: 103 Location: Amersfoort � the Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2001 8:37 am |
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Ooooh! Too bad I don't have my tabbie here, otherwise I'd try a paintover. The image could be *very* powerful if you used the lightsource behind the character, instead of a top-right angle.
Please give it a shot! |
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