[Jucas]

This is a drawing I did. I am not sure If I want to add color or not.... hmmm... If you have any comments please leave them here. BTW I know there is no ear, I left it out because it seemed to disrupt the flow of the image.



sorry for the low light quality.

-jono

[Guy]

hey there.

well when i first look at this i see that the eyes are too far apart. the eyes should have about 1 to 1.5 of the eyes width between them. hope that makes sence.

[Molybdenum-Indiscipline]

I am uncertain as to the nature of this drawing, I see that you have partially framed the eyes, thus seperating them from any additional elements of the drawing (i.e the hair). Perhaps this is intentional? I believe that the left side of the drawing is the strongest part. The right eye does not appear to be congruent to the 'flow of the image'. If the framing of the eyes is not intentional, it would seem that our friend has hair sprouting from his forehead in a disturbingly linear fashion. Perhaps the lack of detail is due in part to the fact that this is an outline for colouring. If this is the case, I shall reserve further comment until I have seen the coloured image. The line quality is good.