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sacrelicious
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Location: Isla Vista, CA
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 Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 2:04 pm |
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| Hmmm... I think the arm could be a bit bigger (mostly longer), other than that it looks pretty good. One thing that bugs me, though, is that the whole thing looks kind of "lumpy." Maybe fill out some of the creases on the arms and legs? |
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PlantMan
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Location: Brighton, England
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| Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 11:26 pm |
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Before I put on a texture I wanted to get feedback and crits on the proportions etc. I tend to do wrong here.....
Please drag this to the address bar. |
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PlantMan
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 8:13 am |
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| Theres somthing not right about it. It isn't supposed to be overblown or like a Superhero. Is it too inflated/short? |
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mellowsmoothe
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 8:46 am |
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i think the pants look like melted candle wax. the rest seems good though. i would just work on making the folds and creases in the pants look more realistic. it seems that they just float there instead of hanging down. think gravity. good luck!
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NilreMK
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Location: Canada
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 1:01 pm |
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| Please fix his crotch.. and mm, get some anatomy references, his profile doenst look good. You should also pull his arms back a bit. |
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