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blck junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Jun 2001 Posts: 4 Location: Belgium
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 2:52 am |
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Hi
i`m a student industrial design...but I also like to flirt with graphic design in my spare time. My portefolio is now on-line and I would appreciate it if you`d checked it out and give me some comment.
Drawings are not yet on-line...will B soon
-after my exams-
www.valcke.com/thomas
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Lapjos member
Member # Joined: 02 Jun 2001 Posts: 81 Location: |Germany|BW|OG|
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 5:24 am |
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Goed!!!
Like your graphic designs and photographs (although it would be nice to watch the photos in a little bigger version *g*)
They rock!!
I don't like your site design, too much white and too cold, don't like to stay there, but that's me
Besides the error with the photographs everything seems to be technically ok, the site loads fast, feels slim and good navigatable.
That was it...
cya |
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afex member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 136 Location: South Portland, Maine, USA
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 8:10 am |
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The layout is ok, i don't like the colors to "bright" also you might wanna try some better compression, i don't know if its just me but the layout looks like you had quality on 2 when you saved the jpg. ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Gavin Greaves member
Member # Joined: 04 May 2001 Posts: 96 Location: UK
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 8:35 am |
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Thats nice, very good functionally, I like the graphics, thats a risky colour to use, but I think you pulled it off okay. The work you have is great too, I only have one real crit and thats the way that the images are loading on the 'graphic design' section, my puny modem couldnt really handle ALL the high res pics at once.
Nice.
-G |
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arniemg member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 2000 Posts: 107 Location: Pensacola, FL, USA
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 8:41 am |
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I think the your portfolio layout looks good.
I think the fuse_flyer image is my favorite.
*The only thing that I have a problem with is your Graphic Design section. i. e. Usage of Battle Angel Alita and The Major from Ghost in the Shell. I mean the image looks good as far as layout is concerned. But the credibility of you as an artist drops once you start using others characters as clip art. |
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DJFlayra junior member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2001 Posts: 7 Location: Somerville, MA
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 9:11 am |
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Overall your site is quite nice. The blue and white definitely hurt my eyes though, it was a little hard to make it long enough to see everything on your site. Also, the text is tiny and hard to read. Maybe you could up the size a bit and make it darker? A couple more things (you wanted crits!): I can't click any of your photos (frustrating), there are spelling errors everywhere (I realize you speak multiple languages!) and your bio says nothing, only references other areas of your site that are more easily navigated to via the buttons on the side.
It's clear you have a lot of talent, your work is quite impressive! Just make your site a little bit more functional and less focussed on art and form... Great work man, good luck. |
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daz199 member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 1999 Posts: 415 Location: Surrey, BC, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 12:52 pm |
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lots of spelling mistakes, but ur industrial stuff is awesome!!! |
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Salty Dog junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Apr 2001 Posts: 45 Location: Canton, OH
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 11:48 pm |
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Um......you spelled "portfolio" wrong on your website (and this post) That's a killer no-no when employers are looking at work. |
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