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Ansel
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 Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 9:50 am |
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This is one of my first paintings. I'd appreciate any comments or critiques..
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Vgta
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 9:58 am |
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Hey it's Cloud!!!
Looks pretty cool, the only problem that I have with it is that it feels really soft, maybe needs some sharper edges.
The right forearm (the one to our left) seems a little off; and the sword blends in with his pants. The folds in the clothing look pretty good, but they look a tad over starched.
Still, it looks REALLY good and for being one of your first paintings I must say you did a great job.
He looks like a cross between Goku and cloud actually. I like it.
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Jucas
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 6:13 pm |
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| Cool. The thing about anime is the sharp edges. That is what defines anime, at least for me. It is always clean, try to sharpen your lines. Perhaps don't smudge all of your lines leave some for defination so your main subject pops out. |
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chip_artz
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 11:18 pm |
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| Cloud!!!.... phat... you could render his shoes more. |
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