[danyi]

i haven't had time to fix my last piece-- but i was spending some time the other day practicing my eyes. I figure, i need practice on certain areas... anyone got any help on understand the contours of the human face more? i have trouble with light and how it curves on the face.



tell me what you think. any help would be heaven sent!

-/danyi.

[Imhotep]

Wow, looks really cool. But it seems to sort of be missing the wet sheen-super-thin-eye-cover thing.


Anyway, it dunno if that made any sense, but as for the contours of the face, I'd suggest drawing just the contours of faces in line. I know that helped me some.

[danyi]

You know what the funny part is, is that the little sheen is actually there -- but for some odd reason, the way i did the makeup make it very hard to see.

Thank you Imho =) Any clue of how i could make the sheen thingie there more noticeably?

-/d.

[kegie]

I think you need to define the strands in the eyelash a bit more. Right now, the lashes blend into the eyelid if you see what I mean.
Also the tears look a bit too solid, like fluffy clouds =)
But the iris looks amazing

[artifish]

Very neat, if a little cheesy with the flares.
The tearwater doesn't quiet come across as such. It would probably help to define smaller areas of sharp highlights.
Anyway, good job.