[geoman2k]

this is in the orge thread too... but since theres no chance of it getting feedback there, i'll post a new thread on it too. i wanted to stress sound, movement and emotion in this one, so I made it really sketchy (that, and I only had an hour and a half to do it, in Health class :P ). heres the sketch.




and heres a super-fast colorinh job. this is what i need help on. basically just put in the colors on new layers and set them all to "multiply". how does the color use look so far? how should i make the moonlight reflect off him? hwo does the blue peak look behind him? any help on the coloring of this would help a lot. thanks guys.

[Etah D'Te]

With all time constraints yadda ya, it's a nice pic. Nice and dramatic, up close, but I'm guessin' ya don't want people to talk bollocks so........(warning I'm hardly an expert) the left eye (his left) needs a little more space between the ear and it (I'm guessin' this to be a neanderthal human kinda ogre) also the eyes don't appear to be level. The mouth looks good perhaps a bit more chin, ears are always a nightmare, but those look pretty decent. Hairs tricky to do, I'd say just try to keep the lines flowing in the same direction.
As for the coloured version, It's a good start, but don't be afraid to use the extremes, check Dhabihs Darth Maul, perfect use of contrast. So get in there and dodge/burn that boy! Anyway, post this pic after you do any more on it, it's looking good so far, so don't stop now!!!!

[Collosimo]

Crit: The hair nees some work.. it looks too scratchy.. try doin the lines in the same direction as mentioned... and also try some line thickness variation.. becuase hair clumps up!

good work overall... I hope you get some more replies too! I have to go right now so, maybe I'll come back and help some more a bit later.. cya.

[Dryfire]

That is one intense image! The emotion there is awsome... soooo nice. Good job... reminds me of myelf drawing in class all the time ;-) as i say.. nothing better to do

[geoman2k]

hey thanks for the feedback guys, i apretiate it. i'll keep working on the pic, and take the crits in concideration on furture versions. if a come up with any future versions, i'll post em

thanks again