[GiTcH]

[Vesuvius]

nice attempt, composition is promising, but they look like midgets due to anatomy issues

[geoman2k]

wow MAJOR anatomy issues.... keep working on it dude

[Imhotep]

The biggest thing that popped out at me is the anatomy, same as above. But, this can be fixed, or made a whole lot better just by lengthening the legs on all the figures and, this is just personal taste, but the baggy clothing make then look even shorter. It looks like you were going for a highlander thing, which is pretty cool. But the trench coats look too heavy, the material looks too think. I'd fix this buy adding more wrinkles in the fabric and more long smooth sections to it, like the parts in-between the wrinkles. I really like it, and the concept is pretty damn cool. Good luck.

Ohh yeah, one last thing, try using the paint brushes more for the people. I know that there’s fog present, but people usually look sort of whited out in fog, not so blurry. So use the paint brush more and up the opacity on that sucker.

[jasonN]

Wow, I really like the concept and composition you have here. Just fix up the anatomy like the others said and this will be a really great image

[GiTcH]

Well, what I was going for here (which I failed miserably at) was that you're actually supposed to be looking down on the two guys. Of course they ended up looking like midgets. *shrug*