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Awetopsy
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 Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 5:13 pm |
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Um... did this today at work.
I think its pretty much finished. I might add a couple misc items but not too much. I think its finished enough to post here
comments more than welcome. |
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black_fish
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| Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 5:50 pm |
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You have some big anatomical issues (or maybe you wanted it that way) but the style is definitely cool  |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 8:06 pm |
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| yes the anatomy is on purpose.. I forgot to say that in the original post. |
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topeira
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 12:35 am |
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weird style though i like it. very neet
funny the way u scensored her ass.
she must be burning up if the water is as hot as to creat fumes... |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 9:23 am |
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yech.. when I loaded it up this morning I noticed how horridly small the hips really were.. so I updated it and reuploaded it. just reload the page and the fixed ver will appear above.
I made the hips more realistic...
[ May 24, 2001: Message edited by: Awetopsy ] |
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 9:50 am |
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Hey Awe, this is definitely a different style for you. I like it
However I just thought I would mention that her make-up would be streaking all over the place if her face was under the hot water the way it is. Sure, maybe it sounds like a cheesy observation but it sort jumps out as odd to me that a "clean" girl in the shower has that much make-up on You also might want to make her hair more flat and wet looking. 
I'd like to see you do something else in this style. It looks cool!
Beth |
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Axl
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 12:37 pm |
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Definetely like the strong, clean style.
I like the steam effect and the fact that you haven't used black to outline everything but a deeper skin tone even though the style is cartoony.
Looks good. |
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NukleoN
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 10:11 pm |
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Her makeup is a bit on the Tammy Faye side, her head is a bit big and her hairline is very low for a woman. Basically..you have a cool style but the head is odd...and next seems to be twisted around oddly..it would be nice to see her back twisting like she is looking to see who is there.
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