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sacrelicious
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 1:23 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work! I agree with the above crits, plus one more: The left arm (holding the gun) seems quite short. Both the upper arm and forearm could be longer. I suppose you did it to be able to fit the gun on the page, but I thought I'd throw that out there anyway. Welcome.
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Jezebel
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 1:49 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice colors
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 7:03 pm     Reply with quote
Crappy? Quite the opposite.
Looks good to me.
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
Since I'm new here I thought I'd post something I have done. What do you think, aside from the all too obvious lack of a light source.



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agent44
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 11:45 pm     Reply with quote
the textures give it a nice feel. Good work.
and welcome to the forum.
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kegie
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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2001 11:45 pm     Reply with quote
Good lineart!
The pants, head and shoulderpads look very nice, the metal bits look very textured. The gun looks a bit flat, and over all I think you're right about needing to define your lightsource a bit better.
But I like it a lot
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