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schwinn
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 Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 6:52 am |
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I hit this one a little more and drew his environment as well. Let me know if he seems any better than my previous.
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Seph|roth
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 8:35 am |
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Your drawings are looking good man 
I like them a lot, specially that city one..
I cant understand how come you havent gotten any replies yet though.. 
Anyways, great work, keep em coming our way !
Cheers |
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schwinn
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 9:55 am |
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| Never get many responses. I must have offended someone somewhere. I still love bieng able to put my stuff up on the forum though. |
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roundeye
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 12:51 pm |
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| yea, its weird eh? i love your stuff. and yea its a big improvement. and the city looks wikkid as well. sorry i cant be more constructive=) |
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Masamune
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:26 pm |
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this is a tight pic. Its all smudgy yet u can still see the lines and u can tell what the artist was trying to acheive. good job!
Masamune |
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Jucas
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 3:19 pm |
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Tis wierd ain't it? I always am posting for c&c for people and when I post something I never get replies. I must be damned or something...
Anways the pic is good. Like someone said, a bit smudgy, Which is not a bad thing! But I'd like the character to pop out of the page a little bit more. How about adding a thicker darker outline around the boarder of him. |
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Dan
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 3:25 pm |
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| what kinda pencil you using? It looks very light to me. Maybe a little more value contrast |
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Staff Sarge
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 3:40 pm |
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They look nice considering the style but you might want to try out separating the highlight and shadow areas using stronger contrast.
If you haven't checked out the Loomis Project yet then do it now: http://www.antsin3d.com/loomis/ |
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ex
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| Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 3:47 pm |
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| Heeeey, those are nice. Love the facial expression. |
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