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ArtKeo
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 Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 7:50 pm |
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Hello, this is a fictional female Pirate Angel that I imagined. The Angels that I speak of are the ones featured in Spawn comic books. This imiginary angel was based on one of those Spawn comic book angels.
http://www.geocities.com/kueksiong/pirateangelpage.html
NOTE:Geocities doesn't allow direct image linking.
Would you please kindly tell me what is wrong with the drawing anatomically wise?
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 7:54 pm |
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very good man! i like it a lot.
whats wrong wiht it? everything seems to be in order to me.... if theres anything i can crit its the sleves... toss em. soo big, and it'd be more sexy if she was wearing a little less, or something tighter.
other than that, its excelent. keep up the good work |
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 8:40 pm |
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geoman2k - Not all women are about wearing tight little sexy outfits... personally I love what she's wearing. Loads of character.
The thing that bothers me is the hand holding the gun, it just looks a little odd. Nice pic though |
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DiZzYg1rL
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 2:20 am |
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Hehe, but she can't hold the gun any better because she might break a nail! ;oP
It's a kewl sketch tho matey! Love to see it coloured too! |
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Axl
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:25 am |
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Nice looking character.
I agree with Jezebel about the gun hand. To me it doesn't like she's holding the gun tight enough, the hand looks loose.
Maybe this is just personal preference but her legs look a little slim to me.
Apart from that looks good. |
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Luci
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 5:14 pm |
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Wow, this is beautiful. I love all the detail in this, I'm speechless for words.. This is gorgeous.. keep it up ArtKeo, I wanna see more!!! 
-Luci |
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edible snowman
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 6:35 pm |
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| yes, too make it more realistic she should be running around in the old west wearing a g-string. i like it. blah. |
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