[DarkStalker1]

First pic with more than one layer ! Please
help . I am commeted to do better work !

[ May 18, 2001: Message edited by: DarkStalker1 ]

[Visigothan]

...dude...I'm sorry...What the heck is with the purple cup...? ...That's just foul...

[edible snowman]

he has a very small penis. ill bet he became a knight because he feels inferior.

[Drimmen]

hmm...you might want to focus on one thing at a time for awhile. Critique this yourself. How do you feel about the composition or the pose? Your knight seems to have lost most of his armor. Maybe the guy hanging from the tree stole it and hawked it, thus his tragic end.

The knight seems very effeminate. He's got the long flowing horse tail hair going on, the ultra tight breast plate, and the whole gold and purple cod piece thing is a cry for help.

You might want to try practicing with quick drawings trying to nail down a good dramatic pose.

This guy's proportions are way off.

The presentation is pretty sloppy. It's plain to see that your (mouse?) strokes are all over the place and quite spotty.

The whole background scene should have been on one of the base layers, instead we can see how the green hill appears to be painted around the character's greaves. Stack your layers, use a lot of them.

Keep working at it.

[NextGen]

no.. that's not a cup that's a whole from when he got stabbed. See how its the same as the background. that guy in the background, on the sturdy tree, probably did it.

Darkstalker: practice makes perfect. stick with it.