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::Dino:: member
Member # Joined: 09 Sep 2000 Posts: 250 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:04 pm |
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It may just be me, but I've noticed the loading problem too Not only in this thread but with all of the other critical-depth.net image posts aswell. I hope they get this worked out, or possible upgrade to a faster server. I don't mean to offend Indepth, but unless they're having some server trouble at the moment, it might be a good idea to try having your images hosted elsewhere.
But before doing so, you should probably tell Indepth your experiencing speed problems and see what he has to say.
Cool image bytheway
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v1510nAry member
Member # Joined: 31 Dec 2000 Posts: 611 Location: London , England
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:08 pm |
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Yea, the concept is great flying mountians, and a delivery service, flying from 1 mountian to another GREAT Don't know about the creatures tho ..
Did take quite long to load  |
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Kaiju member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 114 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:12 pm |
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Reminds me of that Disney cartoon "TailSpin". Which for some odd reason was one of my favorites. |
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Wyatt Turner member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 501 Location: Everett, WA, USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:13 pm |
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wow that is cool, But it took awhile to load.. |
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saripol member
Member # Joined: 17 Nov 2000 Posts: 191 Location: Selangor, Malaysia
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:16 pm |
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sweet!! nice color, texture and all
now how are you gonna land and dock an airplane on a place like that hmmm..  |
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sock member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 167 Location: Austria
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:24 pm |
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ooh, cute style, i would buy the book, hehe
keep working  |
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Sempere member
Member # Joined: 20 Oct 2000 Posts: 206 Location: Spain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:24 pm |
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Hip !!!
Hip !!!
Hurra !!!
At last I could see more pics of those funny animals !!!
Are you going to use the same characters than in that old pencil drawing that I love so much or will they be a new cast ?
You can be sure that I really want to check that comicbook !!!
Simply can�t wait !!!  |
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DiXter member
Member # Joined: 17 Mar 2001 Posts: 622 Location: sweden
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:43 pm |
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quote: Originally posted by Kaiju:
Reminds me of that Disney cartoon "TailSpin". Which for some odd reason was one of my favorites.
yeah!! The first thing i thought of to!!
Great pic!! |
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agent44 member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 473 Location: glendale, CA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 12:43 pm |
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man it took forever to load. you need to get that fixed agent...oh wait, this is my post.
yeah, indepth knows about the problem and they say they're on it.
I loved tailspin too. Maybe, this picture is a subconscience homage to it.
Sempere - yeah, those same characters will be in it too.
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Waldo member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 263 Location: Irvine, CA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 1:00 pm |
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I think, no I know, that I'm in for a treat when I click on one of your posts... |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 1:03 pm |
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I�ll buy it, for sure!  |
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sear member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 443 Location: switzerland
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 1:43 pm |
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EXCELLENT!
you'll never cease to amaze me  |
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Simon Gustafsson member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2000 Posts: 249 Location: London, UK
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 1:54 pm |
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very nice. loved pictures like that when i was little, still do! |
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 2:16 pm |
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damn fine!
I think the words Agent44, and comic this summer are a match made in heaven^_^ |
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lldental junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Apr 2001 Posts: 10 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 3:21 pm |
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Hahaw. Baloo and Kip Cloudkicker. Or something along those lines. |
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FFNeX member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 133 Location: Miami, FL, USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 3:35 pm |
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Wow, great artwork, took forever to load, but it's well worth it.
Just one thing though, looks like the plane is just "floating" there, I mean I don't see anything holding it and it looks like the engines are off...is there an explanation for it? Looking forward to that comic. |
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visual myriad member
Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2001 Posts: 150 Location: Sydney, Australia
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 3:37 pm |
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Love it! Very impressive. The whole scene is really well done, but for some reason I just especially like that little fuel tank on the left. More? |
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Collosimo member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 2000 Posts: 551 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 3:39 pm |
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Whoa.. thats sweet! damn, I haven't seen a really fun comic image like that in a while! Nice, congrats and I think your comic will rock.
Beatiful rendering on the plane, and nice stuff on the lodge too. I feel however that your other aspects are letting you down. The lack of development and rendering on the characters, clouds and background show, maybe just to another artists eye, but you dont really want to detract from otherwise fantastic rendering.
A+ for the concept, thats really friggin cool. TailSpin yeah...
Keep it up, and make sure you tell us all about your comic. |
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Prometheus-ANJ member
Member # Joined: 06 May 2001 Posts: 157 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 4:00 pm |
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Cool design Really nice.
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It seems a bit inconsistant in terms of linewidth, some are sharp and some are blury. Colors are a bit dirty and unsaturated. |
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BoBo_the_seal junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Nov 2000 Posts: 29 Location: Dallas, TX, USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 5:30 pm |
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heh, I love it. The stripped paint looks great! Do you have a specific technique for that or is it simply drawn? |
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Red Leader member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2001 Posts: 276 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 6:12 pm |
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Cool! Makes me think of Frezzato's "Keepers of the Maser" series.
Uh... how are these guys getting on and off the plane? Maybe throw a ladder in the background? Also, I think you missed putting in a thin line of color for the top of the gangplank...it does not match the perspective of the ground near the doorway as it is.
your stuff always rocks.
[fixed typo]
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Sergenth member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 437 Location: Milford NJ USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 7:47 pm |
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Ah, lovely work.
I immediately think of Skies of Arcadia for Dreamcast when I see it.
To differentiate from Skies. I'd advise having the heavier mountains sink deeper into the sky than the lighter ones. Make some spire-shaped mountains too, and maybe some irregularly club-shaped ones that stand vertical. Wow, you made me imagine things I haven't thought of before. |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 8:19 pm |
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what do i think? i think theres a floating island!!! ahhhhhhhhhh
great work :P |
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 8:44 pm |
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"daughter of lodge"? =)
Nice pic Agent44. =) |
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agent44 member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 473 Location: glendale, CA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 11:49 pm |
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This is a little concept peice for a comic book that I plan on doing this summer. what do you think?
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 11:53 pm |
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Looks awesome as always
Took a while to load though... hmm...
Beth |
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 1:46 am |
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Sweet as always Agent! Great idea - Can't wait to see a story evolve around this!
,Boom |
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agent44 member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 473 Location: glendale, CA
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2001 9:00 am |
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Thanks everyone for your comments and thoughts.
I was out of town all weekend so I havn't had a chance to respond until now.
Waldo- Thanks, I really try hard to post good stuff.
gLitterbug- great I'll marke you down for one.
sear- thanks
Simon Gustafsson- me too, I was kinda going for a story book feel.
Rinaldo- I hope so.
FFNeX- umm, it just floats.
visual myriad - did that fuel tank just for you
Collosimo- thanks I'll try to work on that in the future.
ANJ-77- yeah, it started out as a sketch that I ended up just coloring, dso the lines are "sketchy"
BoBo_the_seal - simply drawn
Red Leader - They just jump on and off. I better put a ladder in.
Sergenth - thanks I, I want to keep it uniqu so that helps. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2001 9:35 am |
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Agent44 that is an awesome peice of work. I love it. I dont even care about other peoples opinion on this one.. I love it.  |
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McSteed member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 134 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2001 2:10 pm |
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You continue to improve and impress. |
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