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ChanXiaoHing
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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 6:41 pm |
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My friend Noelle put her shoe on the table...so I drew it. Rendered with Prismacolor markers, a somewhat new medium to me. Any comments and crits appreciated ^_^
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 6:46 pm |
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a girl i know has shoes just like that
nice grays man. i like the thick outline |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 10:12 pm |
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cool.. 
keep at it .. looks good..
the perspective is a little off..
but still nice.. |
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Ampa
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:32 am |
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Good study, but as pointed out the perspective is not right - the shoe gets too fat at the toe end. I also feel that the nearside of the shoe is a little too uniformly grey.
Perhaps add a shadow to root the shoe on the ground as well?
Other than that well done! Simple but well drawn.
Hugz Ampa |
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ChanXiaoHing
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 4:51 pm |
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Thanks guys ^_^ Yea, you're right, the toe does look a little deformed. Heh heh, about the lack of a cast shadow though, I didn't draw it for a pretty stupid reason - my pen started to leak all over my hand, so I had to clean it all off, and after that, I just didn't feel ike drawing anymore.  |
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