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Shadowman · Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 8:34 am

Here is a quick sketch that I made. I worked on it for just a few hours but wanted feed back before I finish. It was just something that I noodled around with just to practice loosening up my brush strokes. Do you think that it is worth finishing or should I leave it as a sketch?

http://www.tbns.net/rockchris3d/zombie_slut.jpg

Shadowman · Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 8:38 am

One thing I do have to mention is that is color seems to dim when I post pic on the internet. It looked a lot more vivid when I was making it in photoshop.

Cos · Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 8:44 am

Not really sure but I'll try and help anyways. The anatomy looks a little distorted like neck too thick, mid body too small, thigh area too big. Maybe she could be abit more zombified, like sucked in ribcage showing and stuff, depend what you were going for I guess. As for keeping the painting loose I don't think it should get anymore worked as it will start to get too stiff. Its on the right track tho.

Shadowman · Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 9:28 pm

Cos, I do agree with you on some of your comments. You are definitly right about the rib cage. The waist is small on purpose and the legs are big on purpose. That is not a mistake. I am glad that you think I'm on the right track.
Now looking back I think that she realy looks more like a cyborg. My brother says she looks like Marilyn Manson's sister or something.
One thing that realy surprizes me is that I don't get more comments. About six months ago I would get at least ten and now I'm better than I was then and I get one. Not that I'm not greatful for the one. Cos had some good comments to say. Thanks Cos!

Keto · Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 10:03 pm

i really like this, my only crit would also to comment on the rib cage, just making it a little larger, and the section from her right armpit to her breast looks odd, the rest of the exagerated proportions look awesome i really like the legs.

nickmarksdotcom · member Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 244

It gave me a boner!!

eeeeewwwwwwwwwww

Poprocksz · Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 3:56 pm

I agree with making her more dead-looking
and your new version is a bit better
draw on!..........

Shadowman · Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:11 pm

Thanks guys for the helpfuy advice. I'm glad you liked it. I made some slight revisions since the last time I posted. I tryed not to change it to much as not to get stiff looking brush strokes.

Keto: I love girls with nice thighs and I'm glad that came across in the image.

Nicmarks: Well...Glad you have a boner...must mean that you liked it.

http://www.tbns.net/rockchris3d/zombie_slut2.jpg