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DiXter · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:28 pm

geeeee.. thats awesome!!!
just love it!!

DiXter · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:30 pm

WheeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEeEEeeeeee!!

sorry, i couldn't think o anything else to say.. im to tired.

Sempere · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:35 pm

Like how you drew the metal muscles in the arms the most !!!

Stilish sword !!!

Pretty pose too !!!

Jezebel · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:37 pm

Francis, this kicks some major booty

Beth

-Tepox- · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:44 pm

Excelent work Francis! this is absolutly one of the best looking cybo-bicthes i know!

i don't find anything important to crit. I just would say to make those metal "circles" on her chest area a little more cleaner and your work would be just perfect!

waylon · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:52 pm

What are you talking about? Inspired by shirow?! You can't even see her underwear!

Loki · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:53 pm

Gaaaaaawwwwww, Francis - I'd loooove to go over this one a little bit, it draws me like a Siren - I've got to tie myself to the mast of the ship ... mmmmust not be seduced ... must work ...

Soooper-neeet!

Seems like you've got some more time again - great! Where is Fred Flicks-a-lot? Haven't seen him post in a g e s!

Oh - and I just love the little springs in her shoes - that's so cool!

[ May 08, 2001: Message edited by: Loki ]

the_monkey · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 2:54 pm

those joints in the hips give it a cool action figure type feel. very cool.

Frost · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 3:00 pm

Great! The linework is awesome my friend!!!

agent44 · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 4:02 pm

I love it! I like the spine area, nice little detail. and the little spots of red all over really tie it together. Good work.

AgentNT · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 4:07 pm

Man that is amazing...I'm currently tring for something like that..so you pic is a inspiration...thx.

warbaby · junior member Member # Joined: 07 May 2001 Posts: 33

My god, thats perfect, I especially like the arms, but it all just flows together. I also love the pose, it looks like she is in some majestic dance, its very cool.

Oblagon · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:17 pm

{lol) http://3DDAT.HYPERMART.NET/M66.JPG

swampbug · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:33 pm

Learn from Francis. Nice pic man. See how simple it is not to have a chick holding a gun. You can still retain Bad-assness and not have a gun. Congrats. you dont know how happy I am.

SpiralEye · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:38 pm

Francis,
I like it a lot; the your rendition is great. My only suggestion is this: from the sharp angle her wrist is making, it appears she is impaling herself. Maybe all characters from shirow impale themselves and I'm missing that need-to-know fact. Otherwise, grrreat!

Good job, mun.

Royal

roundeye · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:41 pm

why am i the only one getting a red 'x'!? i wanna see it too! can somebody please repost this? please? *wah* sounds so nice!

Crasher · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:52 pm

Oh. Very nice indeed.

Would be fun to make a 3000 poly model of it...

you wouldnt happen to have side and front sketches of er, eh?

Collosimo · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 5:59 pm

gg Francis... You have done a great job at giving her a living qaulity, she's elegant look at those curves... well done.

Holly Jolly · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 6:35 pm

Love it! Yea, I can see what image of Shirow's that inspired you. I like your mech girl better to tell you the truth!

FFNeX · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 6:43 pm

VERY nice, I love the coloring.

Superbug · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 6:55 pm

Well its nice...but first of all, to say that it's shirow inspired would be a bit of a wacked out comment. Seriosly though.....shirow?? no..........
Please don't be like Polykarbon.

About the pic, i like the soft metalic feel, but I don't like her face, and she shouldn't have hair...that just looks silly. The forearm tendrils look nice

daz199 · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 7:32 pm

wwwwwoooooowwwwwww

ShinShot · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 8:55 pm

F*ck me nekkid.

How to comment and/or critique?

Her left pinky is not proportional to her right? Cripes...

Maybe darkening her irises a bit more to add to the glow within her pupils...? Darkening the contrast where her hair ties into her forhead...?

Myst IV?

GaH! I'm still trying to animate a green monkey!!!

F.M.N!!!

TheMilkMan · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 9:16 pm

Awsome...Awsome..Awsome.....love this one!!! Maybe my fav of yours yet...

Jaymo · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 11:32 pm

Wheeee! Boy, you make me cry. That's niiiice. Shirow? Right, reminds me a lot of "black magic M-66" from him. Is the linework just scanned pencil with the contrast enhanced in photoshop?

Subliminate · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2001 Posts: 81

wow, that's unreal... the way you mesh anatomy with the mech design makes my jaw drop. My alien friends and I are going to beam your up, extract your knowledge and drop you off in Arkansas. Maybe you oughta bust out with a new type of tutorial called "how to make a drawing have Oomph 101" ... everything down to the pose is well planned, now that I'm jealous, I'm going to have to learn from your style.

Subliminate · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2001 Posts: 81

Maybe I should add this response to my previous post... then again, maybe not...staring at it again, I realize something... If the drawing alone kicks "A"... the colored version will be almighty. WADAYA KNOW!? Maybe I oughta put the wacom away while I learn to draw again

sacrelicious · Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 11:59 pm

Jumpin' Jesus, I believe my exact words upon seeing this were "Pu-HUH!!"

BooMSticK · Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 1:54 am

What is it with you Francis? Don't you ever sleep? Really Awesome work!
,Boom