[nickmarksdotcom]

Working on my new comicbook storyline. The main character is a total paranoid who has a conspiracy theory for everything. Not like Mel Gibsons character! My guy used to work for the goverment and was behind alot of the conspiracy's.

Here is a page from the book!!! Please share any and all thoughts. Don't analize the text to much...that is far from final and really rough

[roundeye]

when you write your messages out like that, so black and white, its not as effective as if you were to simply imply it. it seems a little condesending. i see no difference in you telling me TV lies than TV telling me what toothpaste to use. maybe im just a cynic but i think your evil messages have to be more subversive in order to be effective. theres good idea in there, im just not sure they were executed as effectively as they could have been, thats all....

[kombosagi]

good idea. just the words seem to forced onto the pic. try fusing them more into the pic.

[nickmarksdotcom]

Thanks all for comments. I updated it accordingly and chhhhaaannnged it all around . THanks. Keep in my the writer is really going to jazz this page up