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Iconoclast junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Dallas, TX USA
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2001 12:51 pm |
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Here is a small character my Husband and I are writing a children's story about--this is just the first sketch I did for him, I hope to have many more in time...I know he's not much, but he's all I've been able to knock out lately :)
EDIT--hope this fixes the problem
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[ May 04, 2001: Message edited by: Iconoclast ] |
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Irulann member
Member # Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 66 Location: Dallas, TX
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2001 12:56 pm |
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welp, finally got my password to work--
I'm such a dork |
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S4Sb member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2001 1:33 pm |
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The link doesn't work for me |
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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Irulann member
Member # Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 66 Location: Dallas, TX
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2001 3:13 pm |
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Sorry guys, I completely forgot about Geocities policy
please forgive
I'll try to get another webspace |
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Iconoclast junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Dallas, TX USA
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 7:20 am |
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now I know it's not much--but, just one comment--please? |
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geoman2k member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 375 Location: Indiana
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 7:32 am |
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i think it is a very good piece of art... but the charactor seems a little too scary of a children's book... he has those dark bags around his eyes and kinda has a hunchback.
great art, but in my opinion it doesn't seem suitable for a children's book |
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Jucas member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 387 Location: Pasadena, CA
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 9:30 am |
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I really like everything about this chracter, he is very cool almost whimsical. But the hand really, really bugs me, It just doesn't seem... natural? Some of my favorite parts of the image are the shanding on the arm, and the flash of color under the eyes and in the hair. |
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mutok member
Member # Joined: 10 Mar 2001 Posts: 80 Location: New York, NY
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 9:41 am |
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i think he is a bit scary for a children's character also... tone down the caffeine and he should be alright |
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Iconoclast junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Dallas, TX USA
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 10:48 am |
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Thanks a lot for the responses, guys--yeah, he is a bit creepy in this pic, but I promise he's a really nice guy once you get to know him
He started out very abstracted--and it seems to have just stopped with his hand--I'll work on that
thanks again!
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pixualize member
Member # Joined: 27 Mar 2001 Posts: 174 Location: McKinney, TX - US
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 9:37 pm |
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Hello Dallas/Richardson person! I'm a McKinney person!
I like it! It looks like some of Tim Burton's concept art. I wish I could do that. Looking forward to seeing more. |
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N8X member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2000 Posts: 112 Location: Austin,Tx usa
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 7:11 am |
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hey i dont think hes scary, his hand looks a little scary though. I like you colors are those going to be in theme with the book?
n8x
Texans untie err unite |
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Iconoclast junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Dallas, TX USA
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 9:01 am |
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I think these colors will be throughout the book--the coral colors, soft yellow, and ceurelean blue--I really enjoy those colors, and while soothing, they can also lend a sense of urgency and action--this childrens' book isnt really a true child's tale--it's in a fairly new style, a Childrens' story that is very relevant to adult life--I doubt many true children will be reading it
thanks so much all--
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