[Hlid Skjalff]

Ok, here it is, its 1024x768, but is only 93K big so I'll just [/img] it here, Made using #DSMAX and Photoshop - stems made in photoshop from scratch... PLEEESE Crit it or give me SOME feedback!!!

[Collosimo]

Hey cool colours... really nice atmosphere.

Do you have a Wacom? or did you mouse it... I think you probably could have done it entirely without MAX.

Your composition is out of balance... it is too heavy on the right. You seem to be following the principle of avoiding positioning things directly in the center... this is good, but you have over done it. Re-think that aspect and also consider adding maybe something else to it, like more flowers.. but maybe smaller or in the distance. I dunno.. something.

Overall it has really nice colours.. very atmospheric.. kinda 'this is the truth' or 'peace'.

I like the idea that you have used simple shapes..

[Hlid Skjalff]

Thanks for your crit, Collosimo!!! No, I don't have a tablet, all what was done in Photoshop was done with the mouse. I kind of like the disbalance in this one... I just like the mass of the black space here... But I think I will experiment with other arrangements... I will also try to add some more flowers to it, but my guess is that it will complicate it too much and it will loose its simplicity and moodyness. Thanks for constructive crit again.

[Hlid Skjalff]

Up again specially for FaGFX