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digistyle
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Joined: 18 Mar 2001
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Location: Cleveland, Ohio, USA

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2001 7:22 pm     Reply with quote
It's been a while since my last post. Here's my latest, sketched in Painter and painted in Photoshop.

digistyle
http://members.nbci.com/digistyle/Digiweb/Images/alien.htm
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AoD
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Joined: 04 May 2001
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Location: Marietta, GA

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2001 8:46 pm     Reply with quote
Looks good, bro. The only thing I have to complain about is the lines. You use such soft shading, yet really hard lines. I'd reccommend softening up the lines a bit, particularly around her face and chest. Other than that, it looks good.
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shahar2k
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Joined: 01 Jun 2000
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Location: Oak Park CA USA

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2001 10:11 pm     Reply with quote
he's right about the lines, except not entirely, the lines seem so hard because they have no variation, they are completely flat, what you should try if you want to keep them in is to vary the thickness of the lines to put weight on certain parts, I find that if you use thicker lines where parts meet, or when there's a sharp angle, and thinner lighter lines when they are long, or there's a slow curve it makes the drawing much easier to look at
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2001 10:24 pm     Reply with quote
Positive: Face structure is very unique. I get a whole different feeling of human-ness looking at her face. Simple and easy.

Constructive: GIRL WITH GUN. THATS what I see. You might as well throw a lens flare in there while you're at it.

You aren't the only one who's done this girl with gun combo. ITS CLICHE as the word itself. Something origial please !

-tom
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