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kohse · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2001 8:11 am

This is the re-draw of the second of the 2 pieces that were stollen a few weeks ago.

The model for this peice was Playboy Spokesmodel and Tropicanna Girl Amy Hayes. She is in the newest issue of Maxim Magazine in the states.

dementia7 · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2001 8:19 am

Really nice pencils....her head seems to be floating though. I think the collar need to come out more. Also for one reason or another her head doesn't seem to integrate very well with the outfit. But it does look really nice though.

neebhore · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2001 3:02 pm

That's a nice piece. Her chin sticks out a bit though. I think her face doesn't quite connect, it looks too low and forward from the rest of the head. But other than that...

natec · Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2001 7:53 pm

Cool piece, but I think I'd change the little flare to more of an soft highlight...than the stylized flare...just a personal thing, but I think it'd help

-n

kohse · Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2001 1:54 pm

dementia7 - I'm glad somebody likes my pencil work. I've noticed that if I don't post something digital very few people offer advice.
I think if I darkened the shadow in the collar and the neck area it might bring it together more. Is that what you meant?

neebhore - I see the problem. I made her lips too thin. Amy has a strong chin and full lips. I made her lips too thin so it makes her chin look larger than it should. I'll fix that.