[Nick2k]

Here is my first attempt at colouring in the comic style, drawn by Koen Koopman colored by me using photoshop 6 what do you guys think?.

"Banned by society"



this was written to go with the above image.

you dis-owned me
along with your soceity of perfection
you say i'm not good enough
even though i exceed where you fail too
the world is changing
the future starts now
the past is too painful to go on anymore
no matter what i am part of the future
you can't dismiss me from that too
i don't hate you because you hate me
not even becuase of the ways inwhich i have been treated
by the perfect soceity out there
i hate you becuase you can't open your eyes for more than two seconds
and see who i am
all you see is what i am
looks may be a lot
but just like a book
there's more in than on the out
so dismiss me now
and the ones like me later
but someday we will be more
and you will have to accept us
becuase we are you
we are part of you
weather you care to see it or not

Patrick Bird

[CapnPyro]

nice, the colors are really vibrant, nice texture on the clothes. looks like you used the burn a bit much in some places, it fits though

[Nick2k]

Opps I forgot to say crits are very welcome!!!
Maybe i posted at the wrong time ? where are all the comic guys when ya need their crits?