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Guylon
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 7:50 pm     Reply with quote


Critz please
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Shinsetsu
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 9:12 pm     Reply with quote
Hey. Pretty cool. But don't be afraid to put the mouths on them. Is there any way to extend the edges of the pics so you can see their feet?

I'm a big Tekken fan. Nice work overall.
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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
Great work.. Cept the foot on the top left guy is abit confusing... makes it look like the foot is bending at impossible angles. But yah, cool pink blue lightning transition... you may want to go for a larger contrast where the two pictures meet..solid white line maybe and the letters VS? Just a thought...
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Giant Hamster
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 10:21 pm     Reply with quote
:Tekken 3 Flip Kick:

HIYAH!!!!!!!!!!


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Fallen
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 10:27 pm     Reply with quote
Cool. Love Tekken. Only two things I would do if I were you: 1, Add mouthes. 2, Sharper cuts for coloring rather than soft airbrush style would top off an otherwise great anime style. Nice work.

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topeira
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:40 am     Reply with quote
i completely agree with fallen - sharp cuts instead of soft spray

nice pic but a lil problem on jin's bicep. check it out in anatomic books.

and another thing - i am studying capoeira for 5 years now and i was looking for eddy. where is eddy gordo??? i want eddy!!! GIVE ME EDDY!!!

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ArtKeo
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 5:57 am     Reply with quote
What happened to their mouths?
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VLA
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 6:58 am     Reply with quote
Looks really great !! i would love to see a animation in that style. i really like the style! good work.

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TheMilkMan
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 9:11 am     Reply with quote
ha ha ha ha ha... hamster...he he
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Holly Jolly
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 10:59 am     Reply with quote
Nice Job!

And giant hamster, did you hurt yourself when you did that?
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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 10:59 pm     Reply with quote
Nice pic,still needs a bit of work, it is a little confusing atm.

Topeira: Capoeira hey? I did that for a bit, and one of my friends does it all the time, he is really good too, does forward and back flips, aerials, makako's, butterfly twists, back and forward handsprings, kips, hand spins (in hand stand) and lots of funky looking freezes.

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KeLLuSioN
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2001 4:51 am     Reply with quote
Capoeira? I just started practicing that like a month ago.... I love it. I've been doing gymnastics forever, so I haven't been all that lousy....

and so about the pic.... I liek it, just one problem -- no eddie!

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