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Chin
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 Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 12:51 pm |
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I really like the expression and colours.
The one crit I have is the dude in the lower left's teeth. They're kinda grid-like, too uniform perhaps?
Overall though, excellent work. |
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Aimok
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| Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 1:38 pm |
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Nice work. (technical very well.)
But it is not horrible.
The guy on the left doesn`t fit in the pic.
(Hm, I ve problems to say that in ENglish)
Die Pupille sollte viel kleiner , so dass der Ausdruck noch erschreckender ist und das 2. Auge fehlt, da Augen sehr viel Stimmungen �bertragen.
Du kennst sicherlich "der Schrei", das ist irgendwie be�ngstigend...
Das ist meine pers�nliche Meinung, also lass dich net beeinflussen!
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DRAGooN of deranged
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baerb
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 7:41 am |
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HEY!
Did Gab^kat finally convince you to post?!
Really great job ... already coloured your latest sketch? *curious*
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DRAGooN of deranged
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 8:54 am |
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quote:
Originally posted by baerb:
HEY!
Did Gab^kat finally convince you to post?!
Really great job ... already coloured your latest sketch? *curious*
can't deny her any wishes ,)
what sketch do you mean? hmm.. friday we drive to mekka:symposium, and since i have no ready release, i think, i will do some stuff again ^^
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baerb
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| Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 7:48 am |
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I'll try to mail you!
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Daydreamer
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| Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 8:17 am |
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sweet...naja augen sind zwar ein extrem wichtiger "r�berbringer" von ausdruck...aber leere augenh�hlen k�nnen auch verdammten impact haben...bei "Angst" sollte man aber eher auf schockgeweitete, aufgerissene augen gehen...als idee: lass sich doch irgendwas in der iris reflektieren, eine fratze, ein erhobenes messer oder sowas...die gesichtstextur is net �bel, sehr zombie-m��ig, irgendwas an seinem mund is abba komisch und die nasenfl�gel k�nnte man auch etwas mehr ausarbeiten...
insgesamt aber wirklich gute arbeit, viel zeit investiert, oder ? 
greetz
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