[eclipse]

I will always and forever have trouble with faces. It's a curse, I'm convinced. At least it's something to work on I guess. Anywho, here's a well blessed barmaid. Any changes?

[mellowsmoothe]

yes, well blessed she is. as for suggestions i would softed up her face a bit and make her nose smaller and more slender. im not sure whats going on with the fact that she looks like she's been out in the rain. i would take all of the sparkles off her, they seem to take away from the pict. all together. i like the lighting so keep that. well it is a nice base for a complete work.

[eclipse]

Thanks for the suggestions, mellowsmoothe. With the sparkles I was kinda going for a perspiration look, like she's been working hard all night. I'll see what I can do about her nose.

[Darklighter]

pretty cool man, but that waist is way too high....
she looks kinda elfish =) and the position of her hand on the tablet is good

[eclipse]

Darklighter, thanks, I was happy with the sense of weight the beer tray gives on her hand. I'm not sure about the waist but I think she might look a little elfish because I screwed up with her eyes.

[Collosimo]

Nice, The perspiration needs work, and what about that left breast (hers)? its kinda a bit strange compared to the other one. the clothing shapes differently and too low on it.

nice idea, and you did better than you seem to think with the face! not bad....

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[Dthind]

I like the idea. The sweat and the left boob (her right) seem a bit off. But it has the St. Pauly seal of approval.

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