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Morbid Guy · Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2001 8:51 pm

Haven't been here for a long while. Here's some new stuff, character and a couple of quickies. Critisisms are welcome.

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Optical · Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2001 9:03 pm

REALLY like the top one... cool colors, concept everything.... kinda reminds me of mr.freeze.... hehe...

the other ones are abit to unfinished to crit.

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GreenPeach · Guest Member #

For my money, the sketches are more interesting than the top images. They have a lot of potential and energy. I think the top image could use some more colors. The last image is kicking it.

Morbid Guy · Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2001 11:16 pm

Optical, glad you liked the top one.

GreenPeach, yeah I think I agree with you that the sketches have more life,
I think I overworked it way too much and killed off a lot of potential
I think it had earlier on. I seem to do that a lot. Nevermind you live and learn.

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hipmix · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 8:41 am

wow cool shit man!
Love the first one
Damn those a friggin violent yo!
: )
keep sending your stuff

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DiXter · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:09 am

Woooha.. the first pic kicks ass! . have to draw something my self...now..

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wakestarr · Guest Member #

There is probably something wrong with me but I like the last one best! Do finish it

Regards
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Frost · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:27 am

Kyri??? =))
Nice stuff!

trudel · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 12:20 pm

Cool stuff ! More !

eric_morrell · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 1:11 pm

The top one is a little dark but its cool. In the second one the guy's head seems to short width wise. The third's composition is a little cliche but it is also a very hard thing to make look real. So I think it is a good try but you need more implied action. The last one is definetly my favorite. You have nice colors going, a nice composition, the expression is cool and the guy has a lot of character. This all makes the picture very intresting. I like it.
Eric

DiZzYgIrL · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 4:53 pm

Awesome pics here. I love your style, it gives the images a dark mood! I wanna see some more.

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Thrush · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 11:33 pm

I like 'em all. The running guy is a bit stiff perhaps. I like the second one with the energy/light thingy on his chest. Is that a weapon a flashlight...? The last one is just too cool. Heh heh.

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Morbid Guy · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 11:43 pm

Hipmix, Dixter, Trudel thanks a lot, glad you liked them,

Wakestarr, cheers there aint nothing wrong with you I probably profer the last one too, I'm not sure if I'm gonna work on these
any further tho, but if I do I'll definetly put them here.

Hey Frosty mate, whats been going on man

thanks, been a long time. Heh, heh.

Cheers Thrush, yeah I agree the guy does look kinda stiff when I look at him now,
the flashing thing is some sort of equipment strapped to him, hey flashlights is
good, I never thought of that. ;P

Eric cheers, I agree about making things look real is a very difficult thing and it's
something I work at very hard to try to get even close to. I think my work is usually
lacking action and is from not very interesting perspectictives making it look a little stale and it's another thing I have to work on I think. Thanks for the crits.

Dizzy girl thanks very much

My stuff always comes out dark for some reason
, I think if I did cute bunny rabbits they would look like they wanted to eat you or something, heh, heh.

I thought I'd add another one I did, this time painting on a texture. Not sure which
style I prefer.

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Wildkat · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 6:45 am

Great pics Kyri!
I love seeing your work, it's been ages! The last two you just posted are my favs... the darker the better

eric_morrell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 9:09 pm

that last pic is so awesome. I love that machine in the background. The only thing I don't like is the guy in the really close foreground. He is creating a shape that cuts off the corner of the picture. You might want to play with it a little more to get the colors into the face to make that corner flow or even change the way the face is put or nothing at all. I think this is your coolest pic yet! Very sweet.
Eric

Morbid Guy · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2001 4:00 pm

Kat

thankyou,I'm glad you liked them.

Eric, cheers mate,

Thanks for the crit, your probably right about the things you said,tightened it up a bit, but I don't think I will make any major changes on it now.