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Glondus · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 10:01 am

Well...
Haven't finished anything in quite a while... A really long time actually. Just doodled and scetched and stuff and done lotsa stuff on the Paint Chat... but I did this one today...

Im too damned lazy to color it... but if you'd like to try (doing it better than I could anyway, I s'pose

) the bigger more colorable version is here : http://user.tninet.se/~zkr512y/3some2.jpg

Crits and comments are greatly appreciated!

MrPumpernickel · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 10:20 am

Soo enormously kickass...the guy look like one of the two villans in one of the Highlander movies tho

RamDac · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 11:52 am

Agree! Kickass pic!

TheMilkMan · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 1:43 pm

coo man!!

laslauk · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 2:07 pm

Mmm, girls, guns & hi-tech in good quality b/w drawing ...I like it! The girl's foot in front looks like it could be better behind her left thigh, what do you think?

Unfortunately I'm not experienced in colouring things.. I even decided not to practise colouring (with photoshop) before I get a wacom.

topeira · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 10:58 pm

totally freaking art line, man!

though i think her thighs and feet are too wide, it's one phat-ass piece

u really should color it. maybe wait a few days till u chill out of it and then, re-powered, come back and have some colors to it.

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Apollo · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 11:16 pm

reminds me of apple seed, concept wize.

nice however.

Rob M · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 12:28 am

Mother....of...god...

That's some great linework! How are your coloring skills? If you do get some time and initiative you should try to color it.

Also, if liquid sees this...PLEASE COLOR IT!!!

Visionary · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 12:58 am

This is great stuff!

I like how layed out your shadows.

My advice is to be consistent with your line weight in places. I constantly struggle with this.

Glondus · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 12:58 am

Hey! Thanks everyone!

MrPumpernickel - ...highlander movies? Ive only seen like, the first one with that...japanese, or wossname guy in it... can't remember anyone with a weird mask and a huge minigun in it though...

Rob M - My coloring skills are Ok, I guess... got some colored stuff up at my Elfwood gallery ...
but it's mostly the fact that I'm so lazy and it takes me so damned long to color a pic (+ I get tired of coloring after doing it for like 10 min) that made me not color it...
Perhaps I should try anyway...

Visionary - Yeah, the line weight is pretty hard since I use a 0.13 pen when inking... Ive grown really fond of it, but its not really good when making thick lines... I do have thicker pens... but they dont make the lines as clean... And I dont really like inking with brushes... nibs perhaps...have to try that...

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kohse · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 9:34 am

http://www.geocities.com/lkohse/3.jpg (copy and paste this in your browser if the image is not showing below)

I did what I could with what little time I had. enjoy.

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Glondus · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 10:37 am

laslauk - Yeah, I agree... the pose shes got now is pretty ...impossible, i think

But since its inked I cant do much about it. Heh.
Hey.. I started coloring before I got my Wacom... I think its pretty good that I did too, you still learn things, even though you have to relearn rather many of the things youve learnt when you get the Wacom.

Apollo - Appleseed? Umm...from what I can remember from Appleseed, it was about a girl and a big robot dude... who were cops. So... IMHO, aside from there being a robot and a girl in this one too, I dont think they have anything in common

kohse - Whoa! Thanks! 'Did what I could'? I think its really awesome! Thanks! Hehe, like the red lips on the droid!

Nex · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 11:34 am

great drawing/inking work

I started to color this but i dont have time to finish it any more.

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Glondus · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 2:07 pm

Nex - Pshah! GREAT work, I say! I really, really like it! The colors you chose are a bit weird, now the Robot looks like some kind of twisted frog thing

, but it just goes to show how many fun things you can do when coloring. Love how the guys helmet turnet out too...

Nex · Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2001 7:09 am

hehe thanks. this little critter just looked like a mutant frog in heavy armor to me

Lemur-X · Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2001 11:57 pm

Awesome.

I love the clean lines.

And little critters in armor rock.

--Steve

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Jenn · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 12:19 am

Awesome.. I love the little guy!

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Count Zero · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 1:58 am

Looks cool, I'm especially fond of the girl's facial expression.
If something needs to be added, it would some kind of design on the girl's outfit. Now it makes and odd contrast with the guy and Droid thing and their detailed torsos.
A nice tribal design might hit the spot.

Luci · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 11:51 pm

GLONDIE!

Yay! I Love this, oh, and if I get round to colouring it in time, I'll post, but bare in mind, I suck at colouring :P

Seriously, it's awesome, The line variations is nice and appealing too, thank you for sharing, hope to see you soon on Piant caht tooo

-Luci

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Daijoobu · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 2:06 am

Nice one Elliot!
I looked up your page and I think this one is your best one yet.
I envy your talent, especially in one at your tender age

stneil777 · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2001 3:22 pm

ohh cool i found it here man i liked this so much i colored it. Alt of detail so it did nto come out the best. oh and i do not have a cool mouse pen either

any comments thank you.
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roundeye · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2001 4:24 pm

now that its been brought up again. her right foot should be behind her left leg. not in front. if it was to be in front, the thigh should be more foreshortened...