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Snakebyte · Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2001 7:40 pm

After 3 pairs of legs I think Iv got the ones I like! Anyhow, I think I�m going to call this one finished, unless you can think of a reason not to?

Originally she was supposed to be emerging from a cocoon but�well�. I guess it looks like she is�

I know she�s a little bright considering the background, but I just prefer I this way (so I can see her tit�s better

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Also, do you think the back is too dark? It doesn�t look that bad in Photoshop�..

Dthind · member Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436

I like the concept / image. If I were going to make a comment, it would be that her right nipple (our left) seems to far to her right (our left). However, overall I like the image and the prior image you posted as a progression.

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Matt Ryan · Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2001 8:09 pm

nice picture but there are a few things that i think could be changed to improve the picture. First : the light on the girl is comming out of who knows where. It is much to bright and only casts light upon her, not her surroundings. If you want her to be this bright for some reason, make sure you properly light the whole scene. I suggest that you make her much darker, and have a specific light source. Maybe you could cast a shadow across her face, which would fit the picture much more. Secondly : her skin is all one tone, which is unnatural. If you are going for the pasty look, thats ok , but know that around the fingers, knees, elbows and certian parts of the face, the pigment reddens due the the thinness of the skin. these are just some things to consider.

Snakebyte · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 7:13 pm

Sorry, just cant let this one go so easily�.

Well I forgot all about the nipple so I�ll fix that ASAP.

Matt: Well, I just learned something new! although her skin is supposed to be a little pasty (being nocturnal).

OH! One other thing� I know this has been discussed before but I can�t help but notice that my pic looks much different on my second computer (browner with a pinch or red) so I cant imagine how you see it�.. might be why I don�t get too many responses�

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Lemur God · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 9:33 pm

DANG!

Very sweet. You do good work. Dang good.

If your looking for compliments, I could flip through thesaurases all day for this, but if you looking for constructive critisizm, then the bottom where the hands and feet are...well thats the problem...they arent!

I can never draw the hands right myself. Oh wait, I can't draw ANYTHING near this good. But i like. A lot. Right on.

Oh, and the tattoo, it rocks.

Lemur God · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 9:45 pm

DANG, posted the same message twice by accident, but thats ok, because I can just edit this to add what I thought of after I hit submit. 2 things:

First, the new shadows are great, but you had to understandably move the moon, one of the effects I liked best in the origional. Tough...

Second, is this full size, or reduced in scale for the forum? If its reduced, where could i find a large scale one? Want to get a close look at some of your details (NO NOT THOSE!...Well, not much...)

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TheMilkMan · Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 11:17 pm

awsome!!!!

Snakebyte · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 8:57 am

http://fantasy-anime.org/pub/koreshaV2_3.jpg

This is at 75% original size 3375x1928 1.9Mb non-compressed Jpg. Would have ziped it but it would not have done any good...

And yes, the nipple still needs to be fixed

Lateralus · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 9:40 am

that is fucking awesome. the idea itself and the skin tones and the lighting and the wings.... very good

NeoFun · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 10:41 am

Very beautiful. Her right arm (from her persepctive, not ours) looks a little too buff though-- especialy around the shoulder. The lighting looks great, but I'm trying to figure out the secondary light source you cast on her leg-- where is it coming from?

schabe · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 4:42 pm

great concept/composition/drawing/colors... dont have anything to critique

very nice, impressive picture.

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Lemur God · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 7:52 pm

In my hublest of opinions, the arms aren't too buff considering where she comes from! Also, again humbly, as I have no talent of my own, nipples don't always go pointing right forward, most (from books on anatomy) have a slight outward angling to them. Didn't strike me as out of contesxt.