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Fallen · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 7:22 pm

I paid more attention to the contrast on the skin this time. I must say i think it made quite a difference. Thanx to those who mentioned it in my last post. Crits welcomed again.

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SoMK · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 7:47 pm

White light... brr you're brave :p I admire the details and the apparent simplicity of your work.. and my God, it's SO clean :)) No crits from me, you definitively have your own style hombre ! :p *bows*

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burn0ut · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 8:38 pm

wow i think this has gota be my favorite peice from you fallen! i really like the skin tone on this!!!

Radiater · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 8:42 pm

Hey Fallen,

Nice work. Only thing that catches my eye as being a little off is her right trapezius muscle. With her elbow back like that, I realize it would be raised. However, it still looks a little too big and makes her look like her neck is too short when her stature suggests otherwise.

Radiater.

Poxin · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 8:43 pm

Very nice man, she kinda looks like the gal from 12 rounds.

Dthind · member Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436

I'm a fan. You do Great Stuff ! (Note to self: If I win Lottery, get him on payroll for large scale paintings)

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EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 10:11 pm

rad hair

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That's fucking awesome, Fallen; Great work! I love the tattoos!

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neebhore · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 11:38 pm

Very Nice, the tatoos are good, and i like the hair, but one thing that looks kinda off, is the way the hair 'fits' to the top right of her head. But that could just be me!

[Tool]Ender · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 12:35 am

That is fucking cool.

topeira · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:11 am

i LOVE your work. always has.

the tones on the skin did bother me beofre but u made it! and also the fact the since the clothes are so... black it looks a lil like they r not attached to the girl, but that doesn't really bother me here.

i also am not a fan of her shoulder. i hope u dont mind but i checked how it might look if u lowered it a bit so here is your pic again but with a small editing by me. i lowered the shoulder and moved the head just a lil bit. again - hop e u don't mind

-http://www.geocities.com/topeiris/Ashley.jpg-

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hipmix · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 6:05 am

nice!
nice chicks too, your girlfriend?

just kidding dont wanna know.
I like the light too.
Do you know an airbrush painter by the name
of Noah ?
he only airbrush nice women....
kind like yours...
anyways if i find alink with is work i mail it to you.
keep it up!

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frostfyre · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 9:04 am

Sweeeeet!!! The graphic treatment of the hair reminds me of Patrick Nagel. You've really got a fantastic combo of graphic shapes with subtle toning here. I love it! (pauses to save image to HD)

Keep 'em coming!

Frostfyre

Ian_Milham · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 9:52 am

This is really nice. I love the personality and expression. My only critique would be the flatness of the figure, especially at the edges. I think some kick lighting at the edge of the form would help turn it and define it more.

Nothing outrageous, just a little cool lighting as the form turns away would really finish it off.

-Tepox- · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 10:36 am

-Wow!- Nice beaver!

I like the pic a lot. skin tones are nicely smoothed. Maybe the shadow side of the pic would need little more contrast. But I'm not so sure of it...

Fallen · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 3:03 pm

Thanx All.
burnOut-Mine too.

Poxin-12 rounds??
topiera-don't see much difference dude.
hipmix- Nope, just friends of mine. I'm aware of Noah's work, I used to look at alot of it when I was traditionally airbrushing.
Ian_Milham-I tried that, but it looked to 'comicy'.

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catnip · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 10:32 pm

great knowledge of the human anatomy....taken
into a stange and (madonna) kink!

Visionary · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 11:53 pm

* clap clap clap*
wooooow... white hair done very well infact.

I'm gonn have to agree with radiator on most of what he said.

-Visionary

tayete · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 12:19 am

Great Job Fallen!!!

The hair is great, and I specially like the tatoo on her arm!!

Kon · junior member Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2001 Posts: 7

Very cool..
I Wish I could be feeling what she's feeling!

kombosagi · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 2:47 pm

hubba hubbba....

Poxin · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 3:13 pm

Yeah claudia from 12 rounds (sweet band) shes the vocalist.

i'll try to find a decent pic of her.

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edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

for some reason, the nose seems like the best part of the picture to me. although with a picture like that, why i'm looking at the nose confuses me.

Finer · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 12:10 am

Wow!
Those edges are razorsharp, do you use the lasso tool?

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Joachim · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 2:41 am

looks very nice Fallen. One of my fav. of your female renderings...It has a really nice atmosphere to it.

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topeira · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 3:32 am

just lowered the shoulder, my man.
in your pic it's above the lips line and i lowered it below the lips line. i lil change but i think it prevents her from looking like she has a... hump (?).

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Frost · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 9:30 am

What Joachim said... which reminds me of a demo scene artist that did a few girl repaints like that adding his own style and all (all of his older stuff is hand pixeled though) ... visit www.m4de.com.

edit - interesting photo gallery btw... =)

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TheMilkMan · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2001 1:46 pm

Nice style..looks good!

NineZero · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2001 4:41 am

Sweeeeeeeeeeet.

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