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edgoodburger
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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 5:57 pm |
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give me some tips although i already know that the broad sword is a little crooked :)~
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GreenPeach
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| Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 6:21 pm |
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| Pretty wicked, don't have any advice realy. Why don't you take it to the next level and add some color somehow. |
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the_monkey
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| Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 9:35 pm |
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cool, everything looks right, except that sword would probally rip his whole arm off, its huggggggge
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Maho: the online Comic
tradgedy is when i cut my finger.
comedy is when i fall down a manhole and die. |
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topeira
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Location: Holon, Israel
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| Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 1:08 am |
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i think his legs are too croocked. the knees seem like they are a bit broken and the calfs point outwards too much, and since he seems likee a strong man the weist are too narrow. he seem too slim. i think those are easy currections but the overall style is excellent and very pretty art line
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vector
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Location: Sydney
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| Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 1:42 am |
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very nice!
he looks just a little too thin. Make him a teeny bit more bulky perhaps? |
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