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TheSourPatchKid
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:39 pm     Reply with quote
I aggree I love the style of this painting.

It looks like a real painting to me. Not like a drawing that you thought should have color. Know what I mean?

I have to say that I love the simplicity of it. Its great how you have some sharp edges on the face and some soft edges.

One crit. is I can't tell where exactly the light source is coming from. It seems like there should be some more light on the face.

Also you might want to give a little indication of the eye. Not too much though. I'd rather not enough than too much.
Good work
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topeira
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 11:35 pm     Reply with quote
pretty

i agree with the need of more light. i think the forhead, eyelid and hair could use more light but that's it

i think the proportional are fine if she's a girl around 14 years of age.

pretty work, rache.


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Caliban
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2001 12:55 am     Reply with quote
the proportions seem a bit off - the arm seems a bit small...

but i love the styling. very emotive and moody. i like.
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