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DiXter · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 2:02 pm

I started to make this picture about six month ago. But never finnished it(unusal.. not). I first made it to be in grayscale but i changed my mind and decided to color it.
please feel free to give some feed back.. (lot's of e;s in that sentence.. hm.)

Thankx..

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DiXter

Kool · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 2:07 pm

I like the way he screams ...you really put a good point there...it's a really nice pic ...keep it so!!

Magicman · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 2:14 pm

hi,

the one and only, bruce lee.

great pic, but i think the colors could have more contrast.

bye magicman

S4Sb · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 2:21 pm

Great! I really like it! But it's way beyond the pics I can crit.

surferboi · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 3:46 pm

looks great.. but i thought bruce lee had a lot diffrent looking muscles then that.

also after looking at it some more some reason the shadow from his arm looks strange.. it acts diffrent then id expect.. i would think it would go from dark to light the further it got from the object casting the shadow.. i dunno

[This message has been edited by surferboi (edited March 19, 2001).]

klash.jr · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 4:08 pm

yo that's awesome! keep at it man you'll get better. God bless

Oli_D · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 1:48 am

Nice and clean.

I think the spit/sweat is a good touch.

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Oli_D
www.grayscales.com

ReSistanZ · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 4:18 am

I can't see why you blurred his left hand, since it is in the foreground, but great job! I like it!

DiXter · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 4:57 am

I made the hand blury to make it look like it's moving...

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DiXter

Shinsetsu · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 9:25 pm

I feel as though the shadow cast across his abdomen is a little dark. But it's a great pic. Nice skin tone & shading, and lots of energy.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 10:10 pm

Looks great... blurring a few points is hard to convey motion because if you move one part of the body..often times the other parts move

One thing that might help the impression of moving is adding a background.. and that can be blurred because eyes are focused on the moving object rather than those that are stationary. For example, ever watch a nascar race and.. see the car but everything else is a blur?

Great picture btw, keep it up.

burn0ut · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2001 11:22 pm

Looks good!
I think his chest should be alittle more cut and not so thick you know?
anyways it looks real good, i like the hard shadow on his armpit very nice!
I think the blured hand is a nice touch btw!
except the hand at the bottom id think would look good without the blur, because he's holding that nunchuck or whatever..

eviltoylet: hes not running or even walking in this picture, even if you do add a background, it wouldnt be blurred because hes moving..... but because the background would be out of focus....

DiXter · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 2:20 pm

ok thanks for the crit its been helpful.. but about the strange shading..
theres 3 lightsources.. one from the left and two from the right, thats what makes the unusal shading.. though i agree with you that Bruce lee didn't have those kind of muscles.

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DiXter