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danyi junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 30 Location: Woodland Hills, CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 10:55 am |
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Yay! I finished something else. after advice on my last pic, I decided i'd doodle my hair on a blank canvas (since I have that hair clip, and i thought it looked cool) and I got carried away, and painted this.
hope you like it, comments please =)
hope you enjoy. |
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:23 am |
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It's good, is that the road going up the hill in the background? If so maybe it should be called "Just UP The Road"?
I think the fallen strap looks kind of false, maybe it should be made to look sort of tighter? I dunno...
It's good though, i like it. Nice touch with the signature going into the border ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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danyi junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 30 Location: Woodland Hills, CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:40 am |
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Hahaha. Just up the road does seem more logical, doesn't it? But she goes down first, so would it be just down and up the road? hee. Anyways, your right. I should change the name to that.
also, i tried fixing up that thing you said about the strap:
hope that worked.
thanks! |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:52 am |
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hey... I really like the feel of this pic.. Its very comfortable.... I dont know.. it doesnt seem sad to me even tho its raining and dark.. but I gues the way shes standing up straight and wearing fun clothes..
there are a couple anatomy issues like the neck and shoulders... but who cares.. I like it.
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 1:37 pm |
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*big grin*, the straps look better now! You didn't have to rename it though!
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roundeye member
Member # Joined: 21 Mar 2001 Posts: 1059 Location: toronto
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 3:51 pm |
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um, i think the rain should still be seen over the clouds. they seem to start at the bottom? |
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danyi junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 30 Location: Woodland Hills, CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 5:41 pm |
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Awetopsy: Yeah, I was hoping it would give off a comfortable feeling, since I love the rain. As for the anatomy probs in the neck, i know. I'm still getting that all down. I want to be like Enayla, you know -grins-
neebhore: I wanted to rename it! I sounded backwards otherwise.
roundeye- ye-up. Your right. looks like it's raining from the bottom. Thanks for the advice, I'll definately try that!
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danyi junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 30 Location: Woodland Hills, CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 5:42 pm |
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oh yeah! and Enalya: Thanks, sweetie! I'm going to keep emailing you. Yes, I swear. hah. You so rule. |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:16 am |
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*waves happily* Hii! You made it here, at last!
It's a very beautiful picture, Danyi Welcome to the forum!
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