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danyi
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 10:55 am     Reply with quote
Yay! I finished something else. after advice on my last pic, I decided i'd doodle my hair on a blank canvas (since I have that hair clip, and i thought it looked cool) and I got carried away, and painted this.

hope you like it, comments please =)


hope you enjoy.
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neebhore
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:23 am     Reply with quote
It's good, is that the road going up the hill in the background? If so maybe it should be called "Just UP The Road"?
I think the fallen strap looks kind of false, maybe it should be made to look sort of tighter? I dunno...
It's good though, i like it. Nice touch with the signature going into the border
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danyi
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:40 am     Reply with quote
Hahaha. Just up the road does seem more logical, doesn't it? But she goes down first, so would it be just down and up the road? hee. Anyways, your right. I should change the name to that.

also, i tried fixing up that thing you said about the strap:


hope that worked.

thanks!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 11:52 am     Reply with quote
hey... I really like the feel of this pic.. Its very comfortable.... I dont know.. it doesnt seem sad to me even tho its raining and dark.. but I gues the way shes standing up straight and wearing fun clothes..

there are a couple anatomy issues like the neck and shoulders... but who cares.. I like it.

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neebhore
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 1:37 pm     Reply with quote
*big grin*, the straps look better now! You didn't have to rename it though!
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roundeye
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 3:51 pm     Reply with quote
um, i think the rain should still be seen over the clouds. they seem to start at the bottom?
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danyi
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 5:41 pm     Reply with quote
Awetopsy: Yeah, I was hoping it would give off a comfortable feeling, since I love the rain. As for the anatomy probs in the neck, i know. I'm still getting that all down. I want to be like Enayla, you know -grins-

neebhore: I wanted to rename it! I sounded backwards otherwise.

roundeye- ye-up. Your right. looks like it's raining from the bottom. Thanks for the advice, I'll definately try that!

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danyi
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 5:42 pm     Reply with quote
oh yeah! and Enalya: Thanks, sweetie! I'm going to keep emailing you. Yes, I swear. hah. You so rule.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 12:16 am     Reply with quote
*waves happily* Hii! You made it here, at last!

It's a very beautiful picture, Danyi Welcome to the forum!

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