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EllisR
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Joined: 21 Mar 2001
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Location: Cherry Hill
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 3:51 pm     Reply with quote


This is my first post here : ) Thanks to subliminate for recommending me here. Anyway, this is just a small sample from my page. The full size version and other cartoons are on the site. So what do you think?

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cartoonpage.virtualave.net
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Zorglub
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Joined: 20 Dec 2000
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 5:11 pm     Reply with quote
Nice cartoony style; very funny. The only thing i would suggest is to ease up on the lens flares and think about shading a little bit because some of the shadows are a little off.
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EllisR
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 5:22 pm     Reply with quote
heh. I did go a little overboard with the lens flares, huh? And the shadows, you're right, I better learn to do them correctly. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

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