[XangadiX]

I did this one with my wacom, no paper was used. What do you think?

I seem to be unable to catch the face right and the background? I didn't had the time to do it excactly. I had a cramp :P



and the reference



please tips and comments are appriciated

[Lukias]

Comments?.....well, she certainly is fine piece of work.

Seriously.
Its hard to judge perspective issues when the photo is that large. I have a feeling her back is to long and it thins out to much for the size of her rump *laughs to self*.

So far your doing well, but with some carefull consideration, comparison checks and some overall workups you'll have it sussed.

Keep it up! (no pun intended)

Hey it shrunk. I still hold to those comments

[This message has been edited by Lukias (edited March 20, 2001).]

[G_Luder]

the reason the lowerback/stomach area looks kinda wierd is that youve missed her stomach, quite frankly. youve continued the line from her hipbone up her side and missed that you can actually glimpse a small "potbelly" behind that.. take a look again.... but besides that, a good one.

[XangadiX]

thanx for the comments, and hey youre right, I did miss her stomach, hmm, I'll fix that

[frostfyre]

Niiiiice..... One other thing to add to the comments already here- pay close attention to the folds of theskin near the joints, especially where her leg meets her hip, and at her underarm. These folds give a real solid feel to the figure, as well as helping to indicate the orientation of the joint in question.

Ciao-

Frostfyre

[Obi-one]

cool
yep you did well ... ifyou can do a pic like that WITHOUT model ... i give you a beer
Maybe some little problems about hip proportion but not bad at all!