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poxen
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 8:17 am     Reply with quote
yo, here we go again!

this time, its batman..

didn�t put so much time on it, its kinda slutish, but i like some parts..

tell me what you think..



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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 9:34 am     Reply with quote
it's cool... it doesn't look like a "finished" version,
LoL, then again, the next "smoothing" stage would take forever
I say we oughta have a comic hero competition... something to inspire
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 9:41 am     Reply with quote
I generally like this pic. I think there are some issues though. First, and most noticeable, IMHO, he wears his belt really high. Also, I think the upper arm on his left arm might be a little short (I could be completely off on that one). And last, the head is slightly lopsided making one "ear" look bigger than the other. But it's coming along nicely considering you haven't spent much time on it.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 10:20 am     Reply with quote
poxen: I really like this pic! It's funny, it's as though there's a standardised way to draw Batman, and people get kinda wierd when people don't draw Batman using a certain colour scheme bla bla bla bla. Well, someone at DC can whinge and moan at me. I diverge, this pic is great, nice work poxen. Some more back lighting from the left (perhaps blue) might be quite nice.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 11:16 am     Reply with quote
Subliminate- thx, yea..i could if i wanted to make it more "finished". But to be pasion is not my best side..=)
comic hero competition..yea!

MeatyCheesyBoy- thx, the belt to high? no..
hmm..i dont think so..
yea that arm, looks very wierd..if you cover it the pic looks a lot better..hehe..
the ears, ohh yes, sorry..hehe..well...he have been in a fight or arguing with the "batwoman"..hehe

ceenda- thx! yea, maybe i should put him in a pink dress with a green cloak...
yea, some blue lighting! ahh, thx!

iam gettting inspried to work more on this pic with all this good critique!
THX! maybe there will be a bat, with legs and a stroy behind it....maybe even a batCAR!

thx!

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 11:42 am     Reply with quote
I like the expression on his face, it's almost like hes trying to hold back on laughing his ass off or somthing. Either that or hes getting a vary uncomfertable object jammed up his rear.

perhaps it's just me

good work



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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 4:10 pm     Reply with quote
the pecks and teh arm need a little bit more work, but besides that it looks sweet
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 12:56 am     Reply with quote
Hehe I really like this one man! Reminds me of a really funny movie some guys made in school way many yeats ago... Called Fatman... But he had no car.. no no, he had a "sparkcykel" (sorry, don�t know the english word for that) hehe... it was real fun... anyway, nice pic! and yah, do the batmobile!
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