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Topic : "3 life drawings... 1 2min, and 2 10min." |
burn0ut
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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 5:40 pm |
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I just realized i only scanned the pictures of her back...doh... All the poses she was in my direction where like crappy 2min poses when i was warming up  owell... here ya go 
Man i wish we had this model more often  mmmmmm |
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Olve
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 6:07 pm |
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The second one has got something.
The third one is getting somewhere.
I don't like the first one (have to be honest ).
A tip: You should work more on the structure.
Think weight and line quality.
I'm not to mad about the rendering you did on the 10 mins. (the 1st one, poor thing, hasn't got a but btw ).
Be rougher. Don't try to make nice pictures and don't get stuck in details.
Then you'll achieve better results quicker(the second one looks like a 10 second one to me).
Well. I guess you wanted crits. This was a few. Hopefully constructive.
And. If you don't have a model, draw people anywhere else!
Olve
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Dthind
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 8:11 pm |
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| I like the idea of the drawings, as a practice. There is much potential here, so keep it up ! |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 9:04 pm |
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Yeah,
From your excellent drawings here, I deduce that this chick has a hot ass. No, no, no. This chick IS a hotass. Yes, yes.
I think that the one where here hip is cocked is awesome.
I also agree with Dthind. Who's ever heard of drawings as practice?! Crazy! Are you from Mars or Russia or something?
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ZakatH
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 8:30 am |
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| Can't view the damn pic =( |
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 11:53 am |
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Ah thanks for the comments people!
olve: Exellent points... same thing my teacher tells me hehe
dthind: Ya as a practice lol, the only drawings i ever do IS practice
A.buttle: Mmm you dont even know! my pictures dont due her justice
zakath: Damn they wont load for me at the moment either damned geowhores
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ReSistanZ
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 3:59 pm |
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| I like the second one the most, your shading and greytones on the first pic are a bit too heavy, and the bottom of her cloth is bumping out without any reason... it should be bumping IN (or however you say it in english, I just hope you understand what I mean) Hope this helps. |
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