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MeatyCheesyBoy · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 1:11 pm

I'm just the opposite, I like the head more than the body.

Magicman · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 1:17 pm

hi,

cool pic. looks like hulk after a big party.

bye magicman

MrHiemey · Guest Member #

I'd have to agree, i like the head better also.. i think that it could use some more finishing touches though, a lot of it looks rough. like some sharper refelctions of the fire on his body.

the_monkey · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 1:20 pm

kool i dig it

reminds me of this girl i dated back in 75..

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poxen · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 2:19 pm

MeatyCheesyBoy- hmm..well i have to match body and head more..thx

Magicman- thx, hulk...hehe..yea

MrHiemey- yea, most off my pic looks kinda rough...thx

the_monkey- thx, ohh 75, i wasn�t born then but i can imagine that this "thing" with make upp and a bigg curly wig on his green head whould make him look just.....as a green sexy ladddyy..
did you go alll the way?

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zenonithus · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 2:54 pm

Cool! I think he would look better with smaller eyes.

poxen · Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 12:36 am

yo..

found a old sketch.....
colored the old sketch....

and here it is...
like the body, but the head looks to comic.
funny

plz, give me some comments..

iam tired...

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andskj · Guest Member #

nice as always Poxen.... nothing to crit!

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nori · Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 10:09 am

cool. It looks like it's about to be covered by a wave of fire. Is that what you were try to do? Looks cool.. did you just use soft brushes to make that effect?

-CoNm4n- · Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 10:23 am

No, i am not gay, but the chest is lacking nipples, other than that, nice job. Might want to make the fire a little more defined.Keep up the good work.

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poxen · Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 1:39 pm

zenonithus- thx!

andskj- thx man!

nori- yea, something that whould put him in a hot place..=)
yea, pretty soft..

-CoNm4n- nipples..hehe..he was born that way..thx!

topeira · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 12:25 am

besides some anatomy problems it's great.

love the painting style.

photoshop or painter?

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poxen · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 1:51 am

topeira- thx, its photoshop, i want painter to, seems to be a great program..
thx!

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rocket_sled · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 2:00 am

Hi all, my first post on the forum.

This piece has some really nice brushwork, but there's a few things nobody pointed out.
Hispose could be more interesting- try rotating him a bit, and moving him from dead-center in the frame. What does he think about this fire? Try to tell more of a story.

The flames should be your main light source. There seems to be a lot of ambient light and white light that would be overpowered by the orange of the flames. Check out some phot ref.- maybe Arnold in Terminator... Try adjusting your color balance- turn up the reds and yellows and the green guy will look more engulfed in flames.

Try to start from the beginning with the flames and the subject. It looks like the flames were added later for lack of a good bkgrnd.

A nice piece, but it could have a lot more impact with these considerations.

Bg · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 4:39 am

Great colours!

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CeRbErO · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 4:56 am

Actually, i like the head better than the body too.

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S4Sb · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 6:26 am

maybe you shrink the eyes to let it look less comic?

Tovart · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 6:36 am

Ok, this guy looks like some-one who used to be in my class.

I like.

poxen · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 8:27 am

rocket_sled- welcome!
yea, it is a kinda boring pose and i didn�t have speciall point with this picture, i just found a old sktech, which i scaned and colred, but yes, a story behind the picture whould make it alot better.

And yea the fire are just for backgorund, it matched the skin tone...
=)

thx man! really good critiques!

Bg- Thx!

CeRbErO- you do, hmm, well..i don�t! hehe..

S4Sb- hmm..yea maybe, and i think the mouth gives him a comic look to. thx..

Tovart- hehe, a dangerous guy...thx!

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Negative · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 8:37 am

great work on head colouring, although the picture itself don't impress me, Unoriginal.
you could work on his eyes and on the body - there's too many muscules there, or maybe you don't want it to look realistic