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Cos · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 10:50 am

just a practise run quickie over an old sketch to loosen up,
kinda semi-happy with it, comments crits welcome.

Aius_Lytebringer · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 1:03 pm

I wish I could get that Painty look

My stuff always looks so cartoony... Not that it's bad or anything I suppose, I just like styles similar to yours!

Keep it up. If I could crit anything about it I might say that maybe his right hand should be a *little* bigger to make it come forward?

-Aius

Cos · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 1:36 pm

Thanks aius

my style is usually more cartoony than this, I tired to get away
from that alittle with this pic so I'm glad you said that

With the hand, it actually was bigger before but the perspective
seemed abit too exaggerated, maybe thats my bad...

Hurri-cane · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 2:03 pm

sweet loose style cos boiii !

a little more atmosphere maybe, difference in color depth...sweet as pic anyways.

.caneman

schabe · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 2:29 pm

yep nice pic. its jesus, right ? only the mountains in the background look a little weird.

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sear · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 3:22 pm

ohoh, this one is cool cos.

(this style scares me less than your usual posts (which are good, but frightening))

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Rhomb · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:52 pm

Hey, this is really nice. Where are all the monsters?

. Few crits: the upper part of the cane has too much shadow. It looks like it's fallin back or going to his armpit and not being in his hand in the front. The mountains in the back are maybe too much in the same tone than the foreground, they could be more bleak and blue/grey in color to show the distance. Overall I like the feeling in this one very much.

-Ville

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Nex · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:06 am

love the colors and the mood they create

Cos · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 11:27 am

Thanks for your comments

Hurricane - Thanks man, yeah more colour variation probably would have been better..

Schabe - nah its not really meant to be jesus, but I see why you coulda thought that

Sear - heheh, he still looks pretty scary but at least he's human

Rhomb - Damn, dont worry the monsters will return

Good crits man, I agree with what you say there. Don't want to work on this any more but I'll try the things you said. Thanks, glad you liked it

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