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duck
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crit and comment....plz
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[This message has been edited by duck (edited March 15, 2001).] |
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orionix
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 7:02 pm |
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Hi....Duck
good work ....
Character is bad guy, right?
He He...
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Olve
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 7:05 pm |
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Character is Dolph Lundgren, right?
Nice!
Olve
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Lukias
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 7:05 pm |
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Welcome, this is great.
I like your sketchy style and it seems this is what your aiming for but im-everso-ho things would look better with some harder lines and some solid shaded area's. Instead of a thick layering.
That guys nearly as hard as I am......amazing. |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 8:19 pm |
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Guy in corner is constipated, right?
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Shousetsu
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 9:06 pm |
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| Nice, my crit is about the lines. I dont think the style of coloring you used goes to well with the extreme sketchy drawing. Maybe really hard shadows well look better. |
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Striker
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 9:12 pm |
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good stuff but... I think the lipstick is a bit over the top..
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duck
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:12 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by Olve:
Character is Dolph Lundgren, right?
Nice!
Olve
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? Is it?
Thanks. |
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duck
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:13 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by Lukias:
Welcome, this is great.
I like your sketchy style and it seems this is what your aiming for but im-everso-ho things would look better with some harder lines and some solid shaded area's. Instead of a thick layering.
That guys nearly as hard as I am......amazing.
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Thank you for your crit.
Have a nice day~!
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duck
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:15 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by A.Buttle:
Guy in corner is constipated, right?
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You're right.
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He is suffering from hemorrhoids.
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duck
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:17 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by Shousetsu:
Nice, my crit is about the lines. I dont think the style of coloring you used goes to well with the extreme sketchy drawing. Maybe really hard shadows well look better.
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Thanks. I think so.
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Wyatt Turner
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:18 pm |
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What a BAD ASS, This style is cool. My eye loves to wander around to see those little details. Keep it up dude.
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duck
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 11:20 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by Striker:
good stuff but... I think the lipstick is a bit over the top..
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You seem to have good eyesight.
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