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burn0ut · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 4:24 pm

Well heres 2 5min poses from saturday, everything else was even worse than these

oh and yes...
I accually forgot to draw his face...
He was looking at me strange and i decided not to look at his face anymore muahaha

Had to use geocities cuz 3dp down for hostin for awhile

Elijah · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 4:33 pm

Very nice. Is that charcoal your using? I like the way your line qaulity gives it a real nice flow. You probably realize that his head is too small in the first one, but who wants to look at the male models that are staring at you. also I kinda think the first one needs to have a spine and a scapula.

burn0ut · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 4:51 pm

Cool fast reply,
Yup Its Light charcoal derwent pencil on some smooth newsprint.
And Yup your right the head is way too small.
I didnt really see his spine, scapula mabye... i dont remember...

And damn what a bastard that model was... showing up an hour and a half late! and nobody else ever wants to model... hmp!
hehe sorry for the rant

Joachim · Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 12:38 am

looks good burnout. I can only see one of them, the guy sitting. It's hard to give constructive crits/feedback by only seeing one, and it looks good so

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Jenn · Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 2:16 am

awesome sketches burnout.. I lookforward to seeing some more of these... You should try drawing people on trams... they look at you VERY strangely..

Keep it up

Cheers!

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burn0ut · Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 11:16 pm

Thanks joachim... I dunno i had to use geocities and there all funked out for some reason

Jenn: Thankie i accually should... i do take the bus everyday...

but the evil stares.... *shudder*

thanks peoplez and good night

philjaeger · Guest Member #

i have a challenge for you - try using the charcoal to create a greater variety of strokes from thick to thin to many different directions and values. i had a professor in school that could draw the model life sized (or larger), from memory in about 10 minutes and that includes likeness, shading and highlights, correct anatomy and all that good stuff. not that anyone would expect us to do something like that, but its just incredible to watch some of these master artists.

phil

burn0ut · Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 3:41 pm

I expect myself to do that when im older..
serious... i do

philjaeger · Guest Member #

thats encouraging to hear burnout. please do. some of us have to.

phil