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This is an album cover (about %99 complete) for a small band...Any suggestions/comments before it goes to press would be appreciated...

Enjoy!

edit: By the way, yes, I used photo reference, and the pics I used can also be found below...

For the shoulders/arms/torso:

For the face/part of the hair:

~{V}~

[This message has been edited by Visigoth (edited March 14, 2001).]

Nex · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 6:29 am

very nice!

I like this one best from yours yet.

Socar MYLES · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 7:23 am

Loose, sexy, and perfectly relaxed--I love the flowing lines & solid colours. Very graphic. The one thing I'd mention is that the black lines on the lower right-hand side don't quite reach the bottom of the image, and it detracts from the smooth finish of the product as a whole. Apart from that...Lovely!

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tayete · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 8:40 am

Nice cover and...I've always encouraged people to show their ref photos

v1510nAry · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 9:32 am

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Great picture , just don't like the fact that face is really flat

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shardik · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 9:38 am

vis, next time u might want to put "nudity" in your topic... i have nothing against it (iloveit) but some ppl do

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nori · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 9:52 am

nice work vis. neato. spazstic. I fuck you. good times.

shardik:

Jezebel · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 10:18 am

Cool work vis, I love your stuff.

One thing that popped out to me though is that her teeth look kinda dirty? Maybe it's supposed to be like that but I dunno, everything else is just so clean. :>

hehee, I like her loopy belly button!

Beth

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S4Sb · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 10:51 am

Great work! I agree with Jezebel bout the teeth tho....

How's the band called?

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

The only thing that I think you need to add is something along where I imagine she'll have underwear or whatever.

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SlightlyTwisted · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 4:20 pm

Hmmm. I really like it, but one thing about it bugs me, and it keeps nagging away at my attention, allowing me to think of little else worth writing. The first joint on the finger held coyly up to her mouth seems a to be bit too far along her finger, which makes the finger look like it should be longer, which in turn makes it look like she's bitten the end off.

Other than that, it's very stylish.

shahar2k · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 4:42 pm

I dunno man, usually I'm a fan of your stuff, but while I like the shirt on this girl, the body looks a bit too flat... you could probably get away with another skintone for shading, without it losing it's graphic appeal

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Bloodnite · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 12:53 am

I like the overall job you've done. Only thing I noticed would be the teeth and maybe you should move her finger down a little so it looks like her finger is actually on her lip instead of her teeth. That's how it looks to me atleast, but it still looks good.

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