[Lizafish]

Coloured with markers. Needs a litle more contrast here and there I think.

Crits welcome

Sorry its a link again! : )
http://www.angelfire.com/art/newsketchy/images/Dragonslcol.htm

[Speve-o-matic]

Hey, not bad at all. The only thing that bugs me is the area below his "Pec Protectors". It's a little too dark in comparison to the rest of the pic, even darker than his shield, which makes his chest look way too sunken.

- Steve

[Delucubus]

Hey, I like this. One thing i noticed was hi shead might be a little too small, or maybe you were going for that. Also, I'm no anatomy expert, but to my eye there looks like there's some anatomy problems, especially around the knees.

[Lizafish]

Thanks. Both of you.

I tried to make his shirt look darker but looking at it after the crit I realise it does look sunken.

Should maybe darken the shield and a little more of the character himself.

Cheers for the comments. : )