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pArt
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This is a character design i did a few days back. Any feedback (positive or negative) would be welcomed.
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 8:15 am |
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Your style is very good, but the legs seems a bit short..
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biggunn01
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 8:57 am |
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nice work. i like your use of grays. keep it up.
wes
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ZenDrag0n
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 9:44 am |
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| Great work. But it looks flat, especially cuz everything is straight, and just about everything is either straight on, or at a 90 degrees angle from us. It looks unnatural, kinda like an old egyption drawing. |
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Cos
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 5:25 pm |
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I agree with zendragon's crits but it does show very kool potential, I like the style. I kinda see a vortx influence there too, you should definetely post some more  |
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Jenn
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 6:02 pm |
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Nice work... The leg thing has already been said.. so yeh  Welcome to sijun btw
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pArt
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 1:28 am |
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Thanks for the feedback everyone. I can also see what zen is saying, the drawing does look a little flat and one dimensional, the leg thing was kinda intentional but youre right, thye are a little short =)
thx everyone. |
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maxon
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 8:22 am |
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| nice but stiff |
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Bizarde
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 9:56 am |
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very nice.
i don't have any problem with the flat looking, actually i like it better like this.
i see you have a lot of humour. looking forward to see more.
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v1510nAry
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