[Axl]

The title says it all. I couldn't come up with a suitable background so that's why it isn't too good.
Comments, crits.
Thanks.

[v1510nAry]

The velvet affect really worked (around the butt area )

Might need some anatomy checks,
neck region ,nose is great, eyes are a bit to big, mouths big and lovely and red

Overall Cool piccy once u sort out the Anatomy things

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[swampbug]

I have a compositional issue with this picture. Why must she be holding a gun? Its so cliche. I'm really getting tired of seeing a "babe" holding a gun. Or a sword. Be original, pleeeeeease!

-tom

[ZenDrag0n]

Not to be picky, but the eye on the right side of the image is at a cubist angle compared to how it should be. The human head is curved, especially when at an angle, so that eye wouldn't appear dead on with us, like it is in the image.

The head is great by the way (besides that nick).

[Lomi]

its not just here eyes that r too big, her whole face is too big for her head, and by the way the background doesnt suck :d

[Axl]

v1510nAry you mentioned some anatomy problems, guess it's hard for me to see it in my own work. The only thing I think that might be wrong is her arm, not to sure.
I've made her eyes smaller and added some shading to the neck.
1st pic shows the changes, 2nd is the original.