[CapnPyro]

Here be page 2!


Page 2 (big)

And heres the first page-
Page 1
Page 1 (big)

comments and critiques welcome, spank you very much

-Cap
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[This message has been edited by CapnPyro (edited March 07, 2001).]

[Akolyte]

Cool, I only have a problem with her facial structure, sort of unappealing jaw thrust. Nice sequence.

[CapnPyro]

hrmz, first ive heard someone critique that, i'll see what i can do about the profiles in the future

[ZenDrag0n]

Her face/head features look different in the second page than the first. Good pencils. Sorry if this sounds picky, but the angle that you have her ass thrust back, would be incredibly hard on her back--it's beyond unnatural there.

[CapnPyro]

Thanks for having a look,

Jungle booty! Yah, it's a litle big and out there, but that's the point, to grab your eye, just so long as its not Liefeld bad I think im safe