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Topic : "What y'all think about my friend Kusabi ?" |
Y05hi
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 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:27 pm |
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My second art ... words are useless
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Shaded
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:34 pm |
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Hmm, nose is offset. Hair looks like blob. Shift nose to the left and add strands?
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Plouffe
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:37 pm |
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| hey thats pretty good for a second peice of art =) .. what i would do is make the hair darker and every other color because right now it looks really BLEACHY if you know what i mean. likes theres a layer of smoke in front of him. I guess that is suppose to be the lighting around him. |
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Y05hi
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:42 pm |
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| the bleachy thing saved me a lot of backgrounding |
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Plouffe
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:54 pm |
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| i dont mean whats around him what i mean is you made you pic like its illuminating somehow making the whole whole this bleachy color. So Keep the purple/lighting about him but make the colors of the character himself more BOLD/ darker |
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Lomi
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 12:07 am |
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good for a second, but the nose and coincidentally the mouth and chin are offset to his right too much, they should line up the with the wrinkles between the eyebrows, and you might want to add more detail to his hair so you can see some strands, atm it looks like he has dreadlocks  |
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