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JET
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Just finished this picture, but can't decide which version works better. Can i please get some critiques? especially on the color part. Thnx in advance,
jt
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Socar MYLES
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| Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 9:28 am |
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Do leave the ink lines in. This works much better as a comic-style colour than as a painting. The definition added by the original line-art makes the world of difference. I'd even go so far as to suggest you add some more lines on the back & underwear.
Also, the proportions on the face need a little refining.
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 9:28 am |
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In the words of the legendary ABC comercials "I cant see the difference... can you see the difference??"
no seriously... I like the one without the lines. Its just that much cooler looking. 
dunno why nobody has replied to this yet.. I hate it when people dont reply to my posts.. . 
-awe
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Ed Lee
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| Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 9:37 am |
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| Heheh...you have outdone me as far as G-string is concerned...I think I practiced some restraint with mine. Anyway, it's pretty sexy...I do like the blackened lipstick but perhaps you can try either maroon/burgandy color lines around the flesh rather than black..I've seen both Disney and Dreamworks practice the color line scheme than straight black. Just my two cents..Ed-- |
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JET
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| Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 7:47 pm |
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Thnx for the critiques! I definitely agree that the black lines to add more definition. Tha'ts why i was hesitant about using color lines at first. So i ended up with versions i couldn't decide on which to use I was actually considering, at one point, to get rid of all the lines and reshape the face/features to make it even more painting like. Maybe that's what i'll do next The burgandy flesh lines sounds like a good idea, i'll give it a try. I have really little experience with colored lines so i figured all i need to do is take the darkest color and add more K=tone to it. Maybe a dif color line will work better. Thanx 'all
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 8:28 am |
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"Hey. Mr. Clown..."
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Spiritual_Chaos
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 10:27 am |
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| Its a cartoonie pic so keep the lines, but do not have lines on the painties - that would drestroy the feel =)) |
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BakaSan
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 2:20 am |
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I like it better without the lines!
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shardik
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 3:28 am |
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keep the lines, but they are all the same thickness... hmm me likey
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Lomi
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 3:59 pm |
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i think it looks better with the hard lines, looks more comic than painting, good job, sexy girl  |
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